gabbatron

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on A mentally troubled banker from Chicago finds himself hard to go by everyday due to his traumatic past, he manages the people who made him who he is now which leads him into a plot to sabotage there financial lives and turn his without being notice by the bank, the victim and overcoming his own greed.

OH well the logline made it seem to me that he is now managing the people who 'made him' which mean that he wouldn't be that good without them, so the way you worded it makes him seem evil