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Two best friends with Down Syndrome are ecstatic to discover that they have been selected to test Hoogle’s new technology: the Hoogle Hat. But when the hat seems to brainwash the other test subjects, they realize that they are the only people who can stop Hoogle from taking over the world.
Okay very helpful again. How about this: When a depressed young man with Down Syndrome meets someone online looking for subjects to test his ?cure? on, he enlists the help of his best friend to travel to Florida with the…
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Two best friends with Down Syndrome are ecstatic to discover that they have been selected to test Hoogle’s new technology: the Hoogle Hat. But when the hat seems to brainwash the other test subjects, they realize that they are the only people who can stop Hoogle from taking over the world.
Okay these notes have been very helpful. Worked on it a bit more today with all of your notes in mind and this is what I came up with: After a biotechnology company announces they will be testing a new…
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In a secret facility, a headstrong computer scientist developing microchips implanted in the brains of test animals fears that she might be a subject in a similar experiment on humans.
Hey all this is extremely helpful! Galgamesh you are exactly right that this is in line with The Conversation, The Game, also Shutter Island. The inciting incident: She is recruited to replace the lead engineer on the team. Her goal:…
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Plebe year just got worse for two military college cadets who stumble upon a plot by Cuban Americans to assassinate the President in retaliation for his normalizing relations with Cuba. It isn’t until minutes before the killing is to begin that the cadets discover what’s happening and race to stop the assassins’ plan from succeeding.
What about: "When two cadets uncover a plot to assassinate the President, they must race against time to stop her murder."
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Sophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
I'm also thinking it may up the stakes if I set the film 10 years in the future when the world is on the brink of a global warming disaster (perhaps already flooding in coastal cities due to ice caps…
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Sophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
To answer the first question: yes I do have a definitive answer for how the film is resolved, but I agree with you that it doesn't need to (or shouldn't be) answered in the logline. To your second point about…
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Sophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
Well, at first she doesn't understand why the aliens have given her the visions. Then she starts to suspect that the aliens are getting her to build the technology and drain power from the earth in order to bring it…
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Sophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
Essentially she is trying to develop this new form of energy storage, working on this isolated wind farm. She encounters this ominous force (while she is driving her car to the windfarm during the stor an Unidentified Flying Object flies…
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Sophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
Okay this is great advice. New log line: "During a ferocious storm on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario, a headstrong engineer encounters an ominous force changing the course of her research and mental state, forever." I'm wondering though,…
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When a young actress accidentally murders her abusive acting coach, she discovers a new acting technique that helps launch her career, but grave consequences lurk just around the corner.
"After a brilliant young actress murders her controlling acting coach, her career is free to take off, but she must cover up the increasing evidence she committed the murder." Something's convoluted about this but it is more in the direction…
