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on At the cost of his own life, a severely paranoid father supernaturally links the lives of his two sons. Growing up to find themselves on the opposite sides of the law -one destined to catch the other, the brothers will come to face the consequence of their father’s paranoia, at the risk of their very own existence.

You have the inkling of a good concept here, but your logline lacks an actual plot as it reads more like an ad or teaser. Make sure it is clear who your protagonist is, what he wants, what's in the…