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Penpusher · 90 points

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3 loglines
7 reviews

A shy genius tries to woo an eccentric girl on their Halloween date, only to discover she is a witch with many mysteries.

August 5, 2022
A young, hot-headed loner must embark on a dark, twisted odyssey in Miami to rescue his sister from being forced into prostitution by mysterious kidnappers.

November 16, 2020
After stealing a mysterious present on Christmas Eve, a selfish little boy must repent or be devoured by a monstrous elf.

November 7, 2020

on A young, hot-headed loner must embark on a dark, twisted odyssey in Miami to rescue his sister from being forced into prostitution by mysterious kidnappers.

1. The protagonist is 25 years old. 2. He must go through the kidnappers' tests of theft and violence in order to get her back. 3. The protagonist's sister is 27 years old; I'm still trying to figure out how…
on A collection of John Hughes inspired films and fake trailers to relive their days in high school.

What's at stake for the filmmakers if they don't get what they want? What is their main objective with making these films and trailers? Who/What are the forces of antagonism standing in their way?
on After stealing a mysterious present on Christmas Eve, a selfish little boy must repent or be devoured by a monstrous elf.

UPDATE: "After stealing a mysterious present from Santa's workshop on Christmas Eve, a selfish little boy must repent to the vengeful spirit of Santa's helper."
on A trio of college students discovers street racing becoming deadly when they discover a racer was a serial killer.

Good hook, but add an adjective for the protagonists and create huge death stakes along with a compelling force of antagonism. Something like: "A trio of car-savvy college students discover the deadly consequences of street racing when their competitor is…
on After stealing a mysterious present on Christmas Eve, a selfish little boy must repent or be devoured by a monstrous elf.

Thank you! I've been trying to figure out the clarity of the present as I rewrite whilst maintaining the monstrous elf within the logline standard.
on After stealing a mysterious present on Christmas Eve, a selfish little boy must repent or be devoured by a monstrous elf.

Repent to the entity taking form of the elf who is haunting him for his act of stealing on Christmas.
on After stealing a mysterious present on Christmas Eve, a selfish little boy must repent or be devoured by a monstrous elf.

His selfishness in wanting to open his presents early instead of following tradition.