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“After a series of bizarre events erupt across the globe, a self-sabotaging math genius is forced, along with a team of hand-picked misfits, to? maintain a bug ridden simulation, namely, life as we know it.” Title: ‘Revelations’ – 1 Hour Scifi TV Pilot

April 24, 2020
“After a botched clinical trial, an out of work sketch artist with synesthesia begins to see through time, which leads to a turbulent partnership with an alcoholic Private Investigator to help solve existing crimes and prevent new ones.” A 1 Hour Drama — Title “Savant” or “Seer” , TBD.

December 18, 2019
When a wonder drug makes sleep obsolete, a morally conflicted TV hypnotist decides to help police investigations in a new world where criminals exploit a more fragile and easily manipulated human mind. (1 Hour Crime/SciFi TV Show)

August 21, 2019
“When people across the US suddenly start descending into unexplained comas as the hit their 35th birthday, a pro-vaccine doctor and his 34 year old daughter discover a link to a preservative added to vaccine shots 40 years ago and begin to push the most powerful pharmaceutical company in the world for answers.” (1 Hour TV Drama) Updated Version.

August 9, 2019
“Following the release of a popular drug that makes sleep obsolete, some people start committing crimes in waking-dreams known as ‘Recals’ and a Dream-Detective must determine the lucidity of each suspect while secretly investigating with his own recurring Recal.” (1 Hour TV Scifi/Drama Series) Updated Version.

August 7, 2019
“A hard-headed Police Chief leads a small group of ‘Sleepers’, those to whom a new anti-sleep drug has no effect or choose not to use it, to battle against the increasingly powerful and psychotic ‘Woke’ to get justice for his son’s death and prevent society from descending into violent chaos.” (1 Hour TV Drama) Updated Version

August 2, 2019

on “After a series of bizarre events erupt across the globe, a self-sabotaging math genius is forced, along with a team of hand-picked misfits, to? maintain a bug ridden simulation, namely, life as we know it.” Title: ‘Revelations’ – 1 Hour Scifi TV Pilot

Other Options for hero adjectives: ??After a series of bizarre events erupt across the globe, a drug addicted mathematician is visited by some other worldly guests and is forced, along with a team of societal misfits, to help them maintain…
on “After a series of bizarre events erupt across the globe, a self-sabotaging math genius is forced, along with a team of hand-picked misfits, to? maintain a bug ridden simulation, namely, life as we know it.” Title: ‘Revelations’ – 1 Hour Scifi TV Pilot

Second Attempt: ??After a series of bizarre events erupt across the globe, a famously reclusive mathematician is visited by some other worldly guests and is forced, along with a team of societal misfits, to help them maintain their bug ridden…
on After discovering his new and only friend’s family relies heavily on government handouts, a sheltered teenager struggles against his privileged upbringing and his parent’s ideals to maintain this relationship.

Hi Mike,Pretty solid logline. Nice work. My only input would be to think about giving your protagonist a bigger obstacle in life, something the audience would feel more sympathy for other than the issues caused by a privileged upbringing. I…
on A Mafia family in grave danger after testifying against a notorious organized crime figure are invited to take part in an experimental government witness protection program where their consciousnesses will be uploaded to a simulated reality.

Building on Richiev's ?When their consciousness is uploaded into a virtual reality world as part of a new witness protection program, a mafia don must protect his family against the notorious organized crime figure they testified against, who has followed…
on A 15 year old child prodigy who was born with amazing powers and abilities must unwittingly use those powers to save the city of Boston from a psychotic superpowered cult leader with the help of his equally reluctant and estranged grandfather…a former criminal genius supervillain. ★ Accepted

I like the idea of SuperHero/SuperVillain family dynamics. Could be fun twist on super hero movies :) The kids dad is a supervillain now he forced to be one. He instead decides to use his superpowers for good and enlists…
on When a small town is terrorized by killer deer, an underachieving Park Ranger and her trainee must track down the source of the outbreak while keeping themselves and the townspeople from becoming the endangered species.

This reads great to me. Nice work. I would maybe think about an a description for 'Trainee' as well. Something like 'inept trainee' or 'over-eager trainee' whatever you had in mind for that character. I also like the idea that…

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