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China uses sunlight to stay in totalitarian power, but when a naive scientist discovers how to usurp their control, she’s targeted by every national power there is.
You would say something like that. I wish the solution was that simple.
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China uses sunlight to stay in totalitarian power, but when a naive scientist discovers how to usurp their control, she’s targeted by every national power there is.
With a huge sci fi edge. It's a Golden fleece type movie. Huge journey all over the world blah blah blah. It'll be fun to write though.
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China uses sunlight to stay in totalitarian power, but when a naive scientist discovers how to usurp their control, she’s targeted by every national power there is.
Wow... thanks I did write it over using 3 pages of notebook paper to get to that point. Also aiming for the 27 words limit as well. Hopefully others think the same or can give constructive feedback to improve it.
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When an extremely devoted woman learns of her husband’s infidelity from a neighbor, she becomes devastated and determines to make confirmations, terminate the marriage and take from him what he cherishes most – their kids.
That's a bit sour jeez lol. At least offer a way to help.
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When an extremely devoted woman learns of her husband’s infidelity from a neighbor, she becomes devastated and determines to make confirmations, terminate the marriage and take from him what he cherishes most – their kids.
Make it shorter. Cut out the neighbor, cut out extremely cut out the confirmations, if there is some obstacle (money, parents, feelings etc) that prevents her from just taking her kids then mention that. Also I don't see a character…
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Charlie, a translator, finds his wife has been murdered and turned into an undead shadow creature. He must interpret her speech and discover the mystery behind her death.
I say yes to your last question. Also maybe just to mess around or for some flavor to make the logline more like "OMG i want to know what's going on" Throw in something about the conflict of the shadow…
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Being forbidden to love maakes managing the world’s perception of love easy. But when Rose experiences love for himself he puts his job and existence at stake.
Well not my problem man. You'll just have to take my word for it. Thanks for your help.
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Losing their home and wearing out their welcome with friends, a married couple devise a plan to become temporary residents at a hotel
Change temporary to permanent (even if you know it's temporary) that may setup the conflict for your idea and the logline a bit easier. Also what richiev says works as well.
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Being forbidden to love maakes managing the world’s perception of love easy. But when Rose experiences love for himself he puts his job and existence at stake.
Glad I didn't, it has Nicholas Cage. But on another note I can proudly say this idea is nowhere near the ballpark of that one. Thanks for the comparison.
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Being forbidden to love maakes managing the world’s perception of love easy. But when Rose experiences love for himself he puts his job and existence at stake.
That's the thing he isn't a god, he's more like an agent. One person out of a single police force type of thing. Think Adjustment Bureau. But the price the pay is his own existence, and job. But I can't…
