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When his devout daughter is possessed by the spirits of two revengeful children in order to exact revenge on their remorseless nurse, an accused and suspended priest must pull himself together and exorcise her before she kills the nurse- who happens to be his wife.

December 19, 2019
After a crazed general conquers the mystical rainmakers, a bullied boy must raise a rebellion to defeat him, before another “Noah’s” flood wipes out humanity.

March 15, 2018
After she is possessed by two unresting young souls to avenge their deaths by an un- remorseful negligent nurse, a little girl must find the exorcist who can deliver her before she kills her negligent parents.

May 30, 2017
When a devastating drought threatens to annihilate his people,a boy finding himself in a magical world, where a holier-than-thou general has conquered the makers of the rain, must device battle plans to topple him from within and without, to save his world.

May 18, 2017
When they plot to kill each other the following day, a white supremacist and a black racist rather wake up in each other’s body and must team up and solve the problem or get killed by their gang members.

May 17, 2017
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The Examiner, is a thriller about an emotionally stressed widower and single parent bank examiner, who investigating a multi-billion dollar financial fraud,discover that all clues lead to himself and must find the imposter before a determined anti-fraud unit officer catches up with him.This becomes increasingly difficult because the imposter- happens to be the way ward son he is struggling to control , being forced by an ex-convict bank manager on a revenge course..

October 10, 2016
Obsessed with exposing the private shenanigans of public figures, a betrayed,poisoned and left-to-die anonymous newspaper columnist and voyeur,shrinks instead,witnesses a murder and must get to the police before he’s caught again.

September 6, 2016
After making his “brain-power-boosting” mixture,a wannabe chemist drinks it,shrinking instead into a little man,who decides to read people’s diaries but reads one which lands him into serious trouble.

September 2, 2016
When a renowned, but greedy publisher, plots a murder to own a would-be hit manuscript,his bitter deputy plots two, but both meet their match in the aspiring author-who happens to be a WWII vet.

August 30, 2016
After he’s hired on a potential bank fraud job,a budding young investigator discovers all clues lead to himself and must track down the impostor as his sworn enemy and former boss is hired on same.

February 3, 2016

on When his devout daughter is possessed by the spirits of two revengeful children in order to exact revenge on their remorseless nurse, an accused and suspended priest must pull himself together and exorcise her before she kills the nurse- who happens to be his wife.

Thanks so much. Your questions are on point. I'll answer them ?hopefully by tomorrow.Its 9:33 pm here. And ?I'll take your suggestions too into consideration .
on When a devastating drought threatens to annihilate his people,a boy finding himself in a magical world, where a holier-than-thou general has conquered the makers of the rain, must device battle plans to topple him from within and without, to save his world.

Please as a result of your previous reviews, I am back with these two loglines. Thanks in advance for helping me fine tune it . 1.When his land is devastated by a mystical drought, a simple farm boy sets out…
on When a devastating drought threatens to annihilate his people,a boy finding himself in a magical world, where a holier-than-thou general has conquered the makers of the rain, must device battle plans to topple him from within and without, to save his world.

I'm very grateful for the wonderful reviews. I need to reorganize and come back.
on When they plot to kill each other the following day, a white supremacist and a black racist rather wake up in each other’s body and must team up and solve the problem or get killed by their gang members.

Thanks so much Brothers for your insightful reviews. Very much appreciated.
on The Examiner, is a thriller about an emotionally stressed widower and single parent bank examiner, who investigating a multi-billion dollar financial fraud,discover that all clues lead to himself and must find the imposter before a determined anti-fraud unit officer catches up with him.This becomes increasingly difficult because the imposter- happens to be the way ward son he is struggling to control , being forced by an ex-convict bank manager on a revenge course..

Thank you my brothers and mentors.
on Obsessed with exposing the private shenanigans of public figures, a betrayed,poisoned and left-to-die anonymous newspaper columnist and voyeur,shrinks instead,witnesses a murder and must get to the police before he’s caught again.

Got that,Bro.
on Obsessed with exposing the private shenanigans of public figures, a betrayed,poisoned and left-to-die anonymous newspaper columnist and voyeur,shrinks instead,witnesses a murder and must get to the police before he’s caught again.

Thanks Brothers.I am going to work on your points and come back. I very much appreciate your support.
on Obsessed with exposing the private shenanigans of public figures, a betrayed,poisoned and left-to-die anonymous newspaper columnist and voyeur,shrinks instead,witnesses a murder and must get to the police before he’s caught again.

A NEW ?APPROACH ?FROM A MENTOR (dpg) 1) Who is your protagonist ? A renowned ? newspaper columnist and voyeur 2) What is his character flaw? megalophobic and gun-shy , after accidentally wounding a friend 3) Who is the antagonist?…
on Obsessed with exposing the private shenanigans of public figures, a betrayed,poisoned and left-to-die anonymous newspaper columnist and voyeur,shrinks instead,witnesses a murder and must get to the police before he’s caught again.

OK.And thanks for the info.
on Obsessed with exposing the private shenanigans of public figures, a betrayed,poisoned and left-to-die anonymous newspaper columnist and voyeur,shrinks instead,witnesses a murder and must get to the police before he’s caught again.

OK.Anf thanks for the info.

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