hsingh5

Penpusher · 65 points

235 points to Logliner

1 logline
3 reviews

When a rogue cop is trying to keep his actions unnoticed, due to the killers that he cause.

March 21, 2013

on A worldwide hero and modern prophet is faced with losing everything as a stronger hero rises. He is now forced to defend his title to stay on top of the world that he controls.

You could have added character function?
on After the death of his estranged father, Robert Krunch, a disgruntled office worker in his late 20s, must take his fathers place as an elite high speed hover car racer for a chance at a new life.

Logline perfect as always, but as Karel say don't mention the character name.
on When writing teacher Karels students start failing, he must kick it into overdrive in order to get his students to pass before the end of the Semester.

Nice story using Karel in your logline.