Hutchy13

Initiate · 50 points

50 points to Logliner

Rank2 badges

Daily challenge0 of 8 badges

Nothing solved yet — today's puzzle is live.

1 follower

Latest activity

on Aged out of foster care, Eric Grid needs to learn magic to defend himself from psychic attacks on his path to become rich in the poker tournaments controlled by the mafia.

This logline is good but the structure is off. The best structure for a logline involves the three elements; the event, the character and the action. These elements must be organised into the sentence structure of; "when [an event] happens,…