Icebreed2006

Logliner · 420 points

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18 loglines
25 reviews

Zombies

June 3, 2015
While on a blind date a hopeless romantic young man, discovers that his date is an assassin that wants to kill him.

January 3, 2015
An alcoholic bounty hunter is hired by a business mogul to rescue his rebellious daughter, who’s missing in a zombie-ravaged city.

January 3, 2015
An alcoholic bounty hunter is hired by a business mogul to rescue his unruly daughter, who’s missing in a zombie-ravaged New York City.

June 4, 2014
A weekend getaway spirals out of control for a suave ladies man; when he captures the affection of an alluring woman, who harbors a deadly secret.

May 9, 2014
A weekend turns for the worst for a suave ladies man, when one of his flings harbors a deadly secret.

May 4, 2014
A reformed thief decides to help his reclusive brother, court his dream girl, when he discovers she’s the daughter of a wealthy investment banker.

February 3, 2014
Tension rises on a college campus when a series of isolated deaths turnout to be grisly murders.

November 25, 2013
Weeks into a zombie outbreak, an alcoholic bounty hunter is recruited by a business mogul to rescue his wayward daughter; who’s missing in a zombie ravaged New York.

September 14, 2013
A carefree college student attempts to host a huge party for his friends during the initial days of a zombie outbreak.

August 22, 2013

on An alcoholic bounty hunter is hired by a business mogul to rescue his unruly daughter, who’s missing in a zombie-ravaged New York City.

The daughter is going to be in her twenties.
on An alcoholic bounty hunter is hired by a business mogul to rescue his unruly daughter, who’s missing in a zombie-ravaged New York City.

I want this story takes place a month into the outbreak. Large cities are being overrun by zombies, but people living in rural secluded areas can still live relatively normal lives. The people living in rural areas still have to…
on An alcoholic bounty hunter is hired by a business mogul to rescue his unruly daughter, who’s missing in a zombie-ravaged New York City.

Richiev: That's exactly what I was thinking! I will try to raise the stakes!
on An alcoholic bounty hunter is hired by a business mogul to rescue his unruly daughter, who’s missing in a zombie-ravaged New York City.

Thanks for the feedback guys! I will definitely address these issues in the screenplay and as I develop this premise more.
on Tension rises on a college campus when a series of isolated deaths turnout to be grisly murders.

I am still developing the concept. I will work on that soon and rewrite the logline.
on Weeks into a zombie outbreak, an alcoholic bounty hunter is recruited by a business mogul to rescue his wayward daughter; who’s missing in a zombie ravaged New York.

nicholasandrewhalls: I would like to thank you for the constructive criticism. I know you have posted comments on the various loglines I have written in the past. I would just like to thank you for being 100% real with me.…
on Weeks into a zombie outbreak, an alcoholic bounty hunter is recruited by a business mogul to rescue his wayward daughter; who’s missing in a zombie ravaged New York.

Thanks for all the feedback!
on A carefree college student attempts to host a huge party for his friends during the initial days of a zombie outbreak.

Ok.
on A carefree college student attempts to host a huge party for his friends during the initial days of a zombie outbreak.

* Another antagonistic human force.
on A carefree college student attempts to host a huge party for his friends during the initial days of a zombie outbreak.

Good point raised! Maybe I can find antagonistic human force for my story.