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After the lawyer’s aide is torture and kill by the 20 policemen—he sues them, and must uncover their leader who order the hit in the underworld of police corrupt bureau.

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A young man with no past, wakes up in a town where there’s no future and everything’s grey, meet an old man tells him he will never go back to his time unless he marry the only lady in town, who is eccentric.

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on After the lawyer’s aide is torture and kill by the 20 policemen—he sues them, and must uncover their leader who order the hit in the underworld of police corrupt bureau.

Mike, Odie Thanks in advance. Edit: In the aftermath of a fraudulent national election, a fiery attorney must seek reprisal to the death of his aide and confidant when he is torture and kill after testifying.
on After the lawyer’s aide is torture and kill by the 20 policemen—he sues them, and must uncover their leader who order the hit in the underworld of police corrupt bureau.

Hi Odie, Thanks to you and Mike for the comments. This will surely help everything about my logline. I will be posting the edited version again. Much appreciated.
on After the lawyer’s aide is torture and kill by the 20 policemen—he sues them, and must uncover their leader who order the hit in the underworld of police corrupt bureau.

Hi Mike, Thanks again for the insight. I'll take note of this and will rewrite. This help a lot without so much stress when you want some to learn about this craft. Appreciate much.
on After the lawyer’s aide is torture and kill by the 20 policemen—he sues them, and must uncover their leader who order the hit in the underworld of police corrupt bureau.

Hi Mike, I have made my editing again. I hope this is good. After testifying the lawyer’s aide in the senate and congressional hearing in a recent fraudulent election, a hit is order to torture and kill by the 20…
on After the lawyer’s aide is torture and kill by the 20 policemen—he sues them, and must uncover their leader who order the hit in the underworld of police corrupt bureau.

Hi Mike, Thank you for the comment. Here is my revised version. I hope this is okay. After testifying the lawyer’s aide in a recent fraudulent election in the senate and congressional hearing, a hit is order to torture and…
on When a suicidal boy discovers his girlfriend can only die if she falls in love, the two embark on a philosophical adventure to seek out the meaning of life.

"his girlfriend can only die if she falls in love" meaning the boy knows she'll end up dead if she falls in love. problem is why would the girl fall in love if she will the die in the first…
on A young man with no past, wakes up in a town where there’s no future and everything’s grey, meet an old man tells him he will never go back to his time unless he marry the only lady in town, who is eccentric.

I'm still stretching my ideas... been reading a lot about loglines... your suggestion is good. i'll edit it. thanks!

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