JayHarrington24

Penpusher · 115 points

185 points to Logliner

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On a quiet morning, a reformed and long-retired heavy-equipment repo man is visited by a former friend and associate to answer for a violent incident that happened decades ago.

January 16, 2020

on On a quiet morning, a reformed and long-retired heavy-equipment repo man is visited by a former friend and associate to answer for a violent incident that happened decades ago.

Update: After receiving an unexpected visit from a former friend and associate, a long-retired construction-equipment repo man is presented with a life-and-death choice: step out of retirement to do one more job...or die.
on On a quiet morning, a reformed and long-retired heavy-equipment repo man is visited by a former friend and associate to answer for a violent incident that happened decades ago.

Sorry for late reply - I have been (and will continue to be) traveling around the world. @Richiev Good question; and good point out. ?You're right - I don't convey the main story well enough (if at all). ?It'll primarily…
on On a quiet morning, a reformed and long-retired heavy-equipment repo man is visited by a former friend and associate to answer for a violent incident that happened decades ago.

Edit: On a quiet morning, a reformed and long-retired heavy-equipment repo man is visited by a former friend and associate to play catch up - and to answer for a violent incident that happened decades ago.
on After a getting a call from a mysterious stranger, a college student must perform dangerous tasks that would allow him to save his mother who has cancer.

As a follow up to 85?s comment, what type of ?tasks? is this college student performing? ?You should describe the tasks in a word or two - are they menial tasks (such as raking leaves/taking out the garbage/painting for the…
on After his vengeful ex-partner in crime recruits his son for a dangerous heist, a reclusive fugitive must come out of hiding and take his place in order to save him. ★ Accepted

It's not bad as is. ?It reminds me of ?Gone in 60 Seconds?, except it's a brother-for-brother substitution (as opposed to father-for-son). ?Here's the logline for Gone:A retired car thief must return to his former life of crime in order…
on A married man begins dating a woman via lucid dream technology, but things get strange when she starts appearing when he’s awake.

I think this sounds quite interesting - I'd watch it as is. ?Though, I think the actual logline needs to be tightened and refined. ?Maybe start it with: ?Using lucid dream technology....?.

On a quiet morning, a reformed and long-retired heavy-equipment repo man is visited by a former friend and associate to answer for a violent incident that happened decades ago.