JBalmer
Penpusher · 275 points
- 10 loglines
- 38 reviews
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the boxer is physically the alpha and the hitman is mentally the alpha. And yes the cataclysm is Katrina.
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Hey. I'm making a short film. It's not all of Caesar, just my idea about what all went into Brutus' decision to join the plot of killing Caesar.
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Hey guys. I wrote the script and hated it so now I am in the revise/rewrite process. The plot has even changed. The story that I'm trying to tell now is a film that depicts the 24 hours prior to…
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I'm planning for the short to be about 30-40 minutes. As far as how the script is going to correlate to the play, it runs from Flavius and Murellus quieting the celebrators to the morning that Decimus arrives to Caesar's…
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A subtle change, but so much better!
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Is blood really thicker than water? Is the devotion to the company started by her grandfather more important than her devotion to her friend? Actually since it's a short I didn't plan on including Octavian. How about: This melodramatic parody…
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Yes, I suppose that is is a parody. I want to create a logline that basically says the ambition of two women, leaves someone broken and torn in the middle. I'm even thinking of changing the title. The short is…
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How about: When the ambitious desire for complete control of a software company comes to a head, a war between power and devotion explodes into the professional fatality of Caesar and the internal lamentation of Brutus.
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@Valentin The company is in Rome, New York. The CEO is Caesar. Brutus is the protagonist and she is trying to stop Caesar the CEO from selling the company that her grandfather helped to create. This is a short, and…
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When a state-wide quarantine is enacted, the male residents of a small town become cocoons for invading extraterrestrials.