JC Miller

Penpusher · 155 points

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5 reviews

When the past visits an overmedicated mental patient with a fascinating history, she awakens to unveil her story and upend her life at risk of a relapse. My name is Mary Magdalene.

August 10, 2023
A forgotten overmedicated mental patient with a fascinating past is accidently awakened by an unexpected visitor who ignites her journey to unveil madness, conquer demons, and begin her redemption despite its crippling reality. I Am Mary Magdalene

August 1, 2023
An overmedicated mental patient is accidently awakened to unveil madness, conquer demons, and begin her redemption.

July 29, 2023
A forgotten mental patient with a fascinating past is determined to free herself and claim peace…but crippling memories and a vindictive nurse deter her.

July 28, 2023

on Living her youthful age seems that everyone is trying to kill her for taking her price paid gifted God’s eye power. A mirrow-like earth planet alien invades ready to do whatever it takes to have the one alike power of the universe which we leave her no choice but to destroy earth in order to convert alot energy in defeating the invader.

I'm confused with this one
on When sharman’s parents died in bringing her to life with superpowers abilities in her, in a world where commoners hope on the safety of their lives to the hero they turned against, sharman must destroy earth in absorbing more sound energy in defeating an alien invader who wants her powers.

Yes, but needs work.
on A wide eyed bullied suburban housewife who walks into the robbery homicide of a loan shark must evade being hunted by both sides of the law to protect her family.

I like, but I'm distracted by wide eyed bullied. Maybe: An innocent suburban housewife walks in on the robbery homicide of a loan shark and now must evade being hunted by both sides of the law to protect her family.
on When a struggling Chinese-American laundromat owner discovers she can “verse-jump” between parallel universes, she must defend her family, her business, and the multiverse itself from a vengeful woman with god-like powers who seeks to destroy everything.

I definitely feel like I've seen this before... but with a really good twist.
on The bass player for a famous band struggles to keep his friendship intact and meet the demands of the job as he slowly succumbs to addiction, he must find a way to help himself or risk losing his life and career.

I love it! It tugged on my heart string and I was instantly there, playing it out in my mind. I agree with the reviewer who said to move the addiction up into the first sentence. The rest is fine…