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A dynamic young woman (witness and rescuer) and a reporter of the National Geographic (safe passenger) meet on the scene of a train crash. Over the course of seven days, while the disaster consequences fade and despite the increasing hostility of her father, they grow closer up to a bond; then a lasting union while her father will be won over under pressure from her maid and confidante.
Hi guys, The logline is sent. I don't forget the jealous pets. I think I could write something funny with this.
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A murdered chess champion challenges heaven to save her brother from becoming her killer’s next victim.
So to give to nicholasandrewhalls what he wants to know, the best is that you write this story. Good luck.
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A murdered chess champion challenges heaven to save her brother from becoming her killer’s next victim.
Hi you two, What nicholasandrewhalls says is not false. It's a good hook for me because I like chess and I am older than most of the people who write on this website. Maybe your post would have more answers…
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A disillusioned real estate developer vows to protect the residents of Almiiitey who believe they will be saved from his company’s plans for their future by a spirit from their past.
Is there any community in the Maine which can think it can be save by a spirit from its past?
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A disillusioned real estate developer vows to protect the residents of Almiiitey who believe they will be saved from his company’s plans for their future by a spirit from their past.
Thanks nicholasandrewhalls. It's clear now
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A disillusioned real estate developer vows to protect the residents of Almiiitey who believe they will be saved from his company’s plans for their future by a spirit from their past.
Hi almiiitey, I'm sorry, English is not my native language. Can you explicite "when he suspects it sanctioned murder " just for me please ? Thanks
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A dynamic young woman (witness and rescuer) and a reporter of the National Geographic (safe passenger) meet on the scene of a train crash. Over the course of seven days, while the disaster consequences fade and despite the increasing hostility of her father, they grow closer up to a bond; then a lasting union while her father will be won over under pressure from her maid and confidante.
Thank you very much Guys, It seems that I hold the right track I cannot put any stepmother in my story because the real mother of Alice is also a major character of this story as she is well living…
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A murdered chess champion challenges heaven to save her brother from becoming her killer’s next victim.
Hi Almiiitey Reading your logline, I already have a story running through my mind. It is probably not yours, but it means that it is a good hook.
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When a downtrodden street-dweller uncovers an underground humanoid-reptilian race’s conspiracy to enslave humanity, he risks his own life to protect that of an innocent little boy.
It is a good idea to relativize a bit the threat and make the Hero able to solve the whole problem. Otherwise, some Super-Heroes may take the opportunity to make a blockbuster with your idea ;-) There are many other…
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A disillusioned real estate developer vows to protect the residents of Almiiitey who believe they will be saved from his company’s plans for their future by a spirit from their past.
Hi Almiiitey, Does the story take place among the aborigines? Is the conflict between the developer and the company employing him?
