Jim Corona

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on After the discovery of a file containing orchestrated events that lead to a discharged solider and his military gang’s demise. The crew must race against time through the downtown streets of Miami to escape the CIA’s manhunt, leading to a series of unexpected events, including murder. Bounded by this ill fate the gang must pull off their notorious plan or risk the reality of dying.

dpg nailed it. In addition -- watch out for vagueness, not only in your screenplay proper, but especially in the logline. "Orchestrated events," "race against time," etc., don't tell us anything. And yes, I have to watch out for vague…