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7 loglines
8 reviews

Trapped in a high rise residential building a group of neighbors must learn to work together to escape their culprit.

January 15, 2017
Astronaut’s Grave – Death row prisoners are given freedom by the state if they can come back alive from a space exploration.

January 14, 2017
Beyond the Verse – A sassy Nun gets caught in the middle of a gangster war in Harlem New York and must outsmart the thugs to keep the peace for the neighborhood to flourish.

April 18, 2016
After escaping prison, a neglected step son witness a murder that becomes a subject of a documentary.

March 16, 2016
The Devil’s Cruise – On a family vacation cruise a father lost his daughter thru Somalian pirates and will now choose between saving her daughter or his business.

February 15, 2016
Trish Humphries a self-absorbed news reporter who just moved to New York finally gets her own talk show. She thinks it’s in a big network, but it’s really just public access. Now she has to learn how to work with her new team and balance her open relationship with her three boyfriends while pursuing her dream to be famous.

October 6, 2015
A behind the scenes look at a talk show for women that men secretly love to watch.

October 5, 2015

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I like it. A log line to me does not have to answer everything. It should spark curiosity.
on When his older brother is framed for a brutal murder. A 15yr old prodigy with incredible powers & abilities. Will unite with his “retired” criminal genius uncle. To stop a superhuman genius serial killer; who has a vendetta against the city’s elite.

I like Craig's fine tuning the logline. How come I can;t post a logline?
on The Devil’s Cruise – On a family vacation cruise a father lost his daughter thru Somalian pirates and will now choose between saving her daughter or his business.

It is also much easier to say you will pick your daughter instead of money only because you are not in that situation...I would like to think I will pick my daughter too but I will never be in that…
on The Devil’s Cruise – On a family vacation cruise a father lost his daughter thru Somalian pirates and will now choose between saving her daughter or his business.

This is loosely based on the Donald...What do you think Trump would do? Anyway, I like your suggestion with the wife switch...
on Trish Humphries a self-absorbed news reporter who just moved to New York finally gets her own talk show. She thinks it’s in a big network, but it’s really just public access. Now she has to learn how to work with her new team and balance her open relationship with her three boyfriends while pursuing her dream to be famous.

Ok what about this? An arrogant, narcissistic, substance-abusing Christian with dreams of becoming famous finally gets her own TV show, only to realize it's a long trek from Public Access to where she wants to be.
on Trish Humphries a self-absorbed news reporter who just moved to New York finally gets her own talk show. She thinks it’s in a big network, but it’s really just public access. Now she has to learn how to work with her new team and balance her open relationship with her three boyfriends while pursuing her dream to be famous.

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on Trish Humphries a self-absorbed news reporter who just moved to New York finally gets her own talk show. She thinks it’s in a big network, but it’s really just public access. Now she has to learn how to work with her new team and balance her open relationship with her three boyfriends while pursuing her dream to be famous.

Thanks everyone! This is helpful!
on A behind the scenes look at a talk show for women that men secretly love to watch.

Yes it does thanks. I figured it as such and trying to rewrite it in a better...

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