Kaznats

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When a clinical study to create a vaccination that lowers heart attack risks accidentally creates a novel deadly flu variant, a medical missionary is forced to team up with the virus’s creators to stop a potential global pandemic that could kill millions. The missionary nun and her spy companions are forced to rely on a brutal Russian biocontainment unit if they are to escape from the Caribbean island’s deranged dictator and find a cure to prevent a global disaster.

May 5, 2023
A medical missionary uncovers a deadly virus developed by a covert military unit on a Caribbean island, racing against time to prevent a global pandemic.

March 6, 2023
Many believe the most dreaded words in a hospital are ‘Code Blue, they are wrong. Although serious, they are not even close to those that strike fear in the most hardened hospital administrator: “We are about to exceed ‘Surge Capacity'”.

March 18, 2020
Death is ignoble. Poets may claim otherwise, but there is nothing heroic about its finality. Ed zippered the body bag over the now perpetually young soldier; that once virile face would haunt him for years. ………..would like feedback on this opening sentence

August 14, 2017
Lt. Colonel Tony Stryker, a military ‘Bug Collector’ fights to contain his own creation after its accidental release traps him in the hot zone of a third world island.

June 21, 2017
An Obeah Woman leads a bioweapons collector into the Taíno “Land of Souls” to find the cure for a deadly virus he helped create

March 26, 2017
A military bioweapons collector attempts to cover-up an accidental release of a deadly, new strain of flu by destroying the project’s hard drive before his Russian counterpart can prove the CIA’s involvement.

March 24, 2017
A military bioweapons collector engages in a game of “cat and mouse” with his Russian counterpart who is also his former lover . The mysterious, subterranean world of the Taino Indians hides the only cure for the outbreak of an emerging virus. He has only hours amid growing civil unrest to find the cure before the virus destroys the tropical “paradise” and releases a global pandemic.

March 23, 2017
Things get hot in a Dead Zone for a “Bad Bug Collector” after an accidental viral release on a tropical island.

March 22, 2017

on A medical missionary uncovers a deadly virus developed by a covert military unit on a Caribbean island, racing against time to prevent a global pandemic.

actually it may work but ill leave out the word covert as it is basically what we did when we sponsored Gain of Function research in China. The US sponsors others to do research that may be deemed illegal under…
on A medical missionary uncovers a deadly virus developed by a covert military unit on a Caribbean island, racing against time to prevent a global pandemic.

but she isn't famous nor was the release meant to be evil, it was accidental just like Covid probably was in china, and in my story, the militia is actually our own military doing gain-of-function research disguised in a dual-use…
on Death is ignoble. Poets may claim otherwise, but there is nothing heroic about its finality. Ed zippered the body bag over the now perpetually young soldier; that once virile face would haunt him for years. ………..would like feedback on this opening sentence

BINGO! thanks a lot, This episode is pivotal years later. Ed suffers from PTSD doing this stuff for decades. He partitions it away in his mind but eventually something triggers him to snap. Ed becomes a sociopath with PTSD and…
on Death is ignoble. Poets may claim otherwise, but there is nothing heroic about its finality. Ed zippered the body bag over the now perpetually young soldier; that once virile face would haunt him for years. ………..would like feedback on this opening sentence

it is the opening line of a prologue for a novel. I wanted to see if it adds more emotion. Here is the first graph: Death is ignoble. Poets may claim otherwise, but there is nothing heroic about its finality.…
on Lost in deep space, the crew of a rescue ship must cooperate with an alien rebels to find a way home.

works for me
on Lt. Colonel Tony Stryker, a military ‘Bug Collector’ fights to contain his own creation after its accidental release traps him in the hot zone of a third world island.

the virus is used during a dual use clinical study that has both legitimate medical uses as a vaccine but also military ones as a 'smart' biological weapon capable of targeting and killing at the individual level. The problem is,…
on Lt. Colonel Tony Stryker, a military ‘Bug Collector’ fights to contain his own creation after its accidental release traps him in the hot zone of a third world island.

An ancient, resurrected virus escapes during testing on an isolated island. A bioweapons specialist has only 24 hours to contain it to prevent a pandemic.
on Lt. Colonel Tony Stryker, a military ‘Bug Collector’ fights to contain his own creation after its accidental release traps him in the hot zone of a third world island.

A military ?Bug Collector? fights to contain an ancient virus after its accidental release traps him in quarantine on a third world island.
on Lt. Colonel Tony Stryker, a military ‘Bug Collector’ fights to contain his own creation after its accidental release traps him in the hot zone of a third world island.

yes, it is a modern day version of frankenstein actually. He resurrects a 25 million year old virus then it escapes and starts killing people
on Lost in deep space, the crew of a rescue ship must cooperate with an alien rebels to find a way home.

I've offered you an edit before but here is another, thanks for reading mine. The crew of a deep space rescue ship have one choice, reveal their home planet's location to alien marauders or remain lost in space forever.

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