Laura Combden

Penpusher · 35 points

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After 6 weeks of grieving, a 28 year old widow’s family has decided she is coming home for christmas to ‘get better’, whether she likes it or not.

December 9, 2013

on Sent to evaluate the crew and staff of a new U.S. state-of-the-art nuclear submarine during its trial runs, the head of the U. S. DoD PsyOps Division discovers her vengeful ex husband has planted a computer virus to destroy her while on board. Will this deadly psychological war destroy everything?

The hero could use a weakness or a more deflned personal goal, I think. The outer conflict is very strong though. Sounds like great suspense!