LingeringThoughts

Penpusher · 50 points

250 points to Logliner

on After his wife of 48 years asks for a divorce, an eccentric old codger embraces single life and modern dating in the search for a new girlfriend.

This is a cool idea, and I really get a sense of personality from the way you described the old man as an eccentric, old codger! I can imagine the shenanigans he would get himself into around dating apps and…
on An airline crew smuggling a $2 million diamond on board begins to get murdered one by one. [Title: Fight or Flight}

I like the short, simple style of this logline, but I would agree with the last reviewer that it needs a little more personality. Maybe allude to the murders, but don't let us know so much of what will happen.