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Penpusher · 80 points

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  1. Okay Mike you have very invaluable suggestions. Here’s another editing. I removed the spiritual identity part, however, it will still be included in the movie itself because that was one area she was being manipulated by. Also the “deacon” position is important because it’s about the deception of someone high in the church. While his behavior maybe generally unacceptable, it will be a shock in the eyes of the congregation coming from someone who is supposed to be spiritually matured. I can’t seem to get this around 25 words. Urg! A woman raised in an unscrupulous orphanage hopes of happiness were shattered shortly after marrying a highly respected deacon when he suddenly begins to unleash some familiar abuse upon her. She must now muster up the courage to free herself once and for all.

    February 15, 2019

  2. A broken woman finds herself married to a highly respected deacon, but must now escape a life of abuse and ultimately find her own true spiritual identity.

    February 8, 2019

  3. A young broken girl, released from an orphanage, finally found the love and acceptance she only dreams of when she marries a respected deacon only to discover she and her children are in the fight of their lives to escape a secretly abusive husband and to ultimately find her own true spiritual identity. BTW – This is a re-write from 2 days ago.

    February 1, 2019

  4. A young hedonistic girl abandoned in an orphanage by her parents and in bitterness of soul, finally found love when she marries a highly respected and handsome church deacon only to discover his unorthodox and authoritative behavior hidden from the church. She is now in the fight of her life to free herself and her children once and for all from a lifelong torment a second time. OR A Young hedonistic girl finally found love when she marries a highly respected deacon only to discover his unorthodox behavior. Now in the fight for her life, she struggles to free herself a second time from a life of torment.

    January 30, 2019

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