LucienYork

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The Lord living under an alias tries to reconcile with his estranged daughter who is a member of SWAT, but kills to police officers in self defense and not only finds himself at war with a brutal police force, but his daughter and now the salvation of humanity hangs in the balance.

May 15, 2018
Jesus Christ living under an alias is brutalized by two police officers and decides to fight back bringing him face to face with his estranged daughter a sergeant in SWAT. Their confrontation will decide whether humanity lives or dies.

May 14, 2018
revised:Revised: Christ Jesus living under an alias is brutalized by two police officers this time he decides to fight back bringing him into a face to face confrontation with his estranged daughter a police sergeant whose outcome will decide whether humanity lives or dies.

May 14, 2018
Christ living a normal life as a normal dude decides to defend himself against a brutal police force bringing him face to face with his estranged daughter who is trying to kill him.

May 14, 2018
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May 14, 2018

on The Lord living under an alias tries to reconcile with his estranged daughter who is a member of SWAT, but kills to police officers in self defense and not only finds himself at war with a brutal police force, but his daughter and now the salvation of humanity hangs in the balance.

The writer of Back to the Future said my script was the most original script he's read in 20 years and if I fix the tech issues it will get made... One of the writers from Nightmare on Elm Street…
on Jesus Christ living under an alias is brutalized by two police officers and decides to fight back bringing him face to face with his estranged daughter a sergeant in SWAT. Their confrontation will decide whether humanity lives or dies.

Your comments and questions are spot on and I really appreciate you for taking the time to help me I have read what you have written and I have understood. I reworked the logline I believe im on the right…
on “An advanced alien race threatens to enslave Earth in the 1500’s and humanity’s last hope lies in the unproven inventions of an Italian Renaissance artist who holds a dark secret.”

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