Luke Ramsden

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on An ocean loving Swedish girl teams up with a trans teen, her mother and a rebellious teenager to find answer to her husbands fatal accident while working fruit picking. What they dum over is the dirty under belly of the working visa program putting all their lives in danger

Having experience with Australian immigration process, I'm into anything that highlights how draconian it is. That said, the logline is a bit convoluted. I would simplify it. I don't think the secondary characters need to be included, as it makes…