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Penpusher · 55 points

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3 reviews

A German teenager craving social acceptance unexpectedly time-travels from 1914 to 1933 and must choose: find belonging in the Hitler Youth or break his daughter out of a prison camp.

February 2, 2024
In 1933 Germany, a time-travelling teenage outsider from 1914 discovers that his daughter has become entangled with a communist terror group. Now, he must infiltrate the organisation to protect her from the dangerous path she’s chosen, all whilst wrestling with the seductive pull of the rising Nazi youth movement.

November 29, 2023

on When a 75 year old woman manage to hack into CIA, she´s hunted by the hardest cyber-cop you’ll ever find – her own son

This is a great premise for a comedy. It doesn't give a lot away about how the two characters relate to one another yet. But there's a lot of potential. I love the idea that the son comes over to…
on A German teenager craving social acceptance unexpectedly time-travels from 1914 to 1933 and must choose: find belonging in the Hitler Youth or break his daughter out of a prison camp.

A rewritten logline and elevator pitch. I'd love your feedback - particularly on its clarity and narrative potential.
on In 1933 Germany, a time-travelling teenage outsider from 1914 discovers that his daughter has become entangled with a communist terror group. Now, he must infiltrate the organisation to protect her from the dangerous path she’s chosen, all whilst wrestling with the seductive pull of the rising Nazi youth movement.

Thank you for the positivity and for the much improved brevity! It's my first time sharing this idea so it means a lot to have affirmation :)