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When a young 2.0 human called Uluru meets other humans like him, he must decide if he stays with the pygmy tribe that accepted him as one of their own or leave the tribe searching for a promised land occupied by other 2.0 humans.
thank you for your help much apreciated Going to check that film best regards
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250 years after an asteroid impact leaves one side of Earth continually facing the sun, a lone outsider tries to find a new home in an increasingly more hostile world with the help of a physical manifestation of his soul.
Sounds interesting but the soul part needs more info... this asteroid changed something that allowed for the physical manifestation of human souls?
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Strange people in a foreign land with no constitutional rights, these Irish gypsies learn the hard way that the criminal can become the crime victim!
Who is the antagonist and what is his motive?
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A teen mysteriously cured of terminal cancer becomes the centerpiece of a war between supernatural factions that are hellbent on procuring a miraculous, prophetic pregnancy that grows inside of her.
Who is the protagonist? If not the girl you must decide who it will be. The information is all there but the order in which you present your logline could be better. Start with the prophetic pregnancy (inciting incident) and…
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Set in the year 2050: When he wakes up out of his coffin to discover that Transylvania has become an Orwellian fascist state, Count Dracula must lead a rebellion and take them down before they uncover his true identity.
He wakes up out of his coffin, or he wakes up and gets out? How does he end up leading the revolt? If he uses his powers of persuasion people will know who he is... besides he only gets out…
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Stand-alone episodes with a revolving cast determined to enter the psyche of viewers and leave behind irrational, unrealistic, or environmentally triggered fears and an ending that will be anything but happy!
Who's the protagonist? The goal and conflict is not clear. Who are these people? What kind of show is this? Fiction or reality TV? How do they enter the psyche of the viewers? What's the genre?
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A group of sister have a lengthy conversation trying to fill in the social, cultural and physiological blanks about a long extinct species: Humans.
Sounds like a short movie, or a theater piece... Use the plural in sisters... How many sisters? Is this a post-human species or just a group of aliens? Are they organic beings? What is their interest in humans? Are they…
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A driver intent on picking up and murdering a hitch-hiker picks up a hitch-hiker intent on murdering a driver.
Cool. This could work as a comedy as well.
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When his doctor tells him he only has one month to live, a recent grad and his best friend are determined to check everything off of his bucket list.
Don't start with the doctor, start with the protagonist and give a bit more info on this guy. Who is he? Ex.: When a popular recent grad finds out he has just one month to live, he and his best…
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Two cops must stop a drug cartel from unleashing his narcotic on the city before everyone becomes addicted.
...unleashing their narcotic... What kind of narcotic are we talking about and why will "everyone" use it and become addicted? Is it in the food? In the water?
