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When the most trusting man in America journeys to Nigeria to collect his expected inheritance promised to him in an e-mail by a prince, he must overcome bitter reality and find his prince in order to see the good in people once again.
That is a funny angle, but I've already developed the premise of a middle school counselor who enrages everyone with his trusting attitude.
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On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.
Hi Mark, in loglines we usually omit character names: On the eve of his gay uncle's anniversary dinner, a troubled man must again battle with alcohol and the impact it continues to have on the family; all the while celebrating…
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The lives of an undefeated boxer and a former hitman intermingle on the corrupt and sinful streets of New Orleans as they join forces to save the they love city and the people in it from cataclysm
Interesting; personally, I would specify that this is during Katrina, it is something people can picture, rather than any old cataclysm.
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When an elderly man sues a large bank for foreclosing on him due to a data error, he dies of a heart attack in court, and his daughter then brings a wrongful death suit against the same bank.
This seems too "dog bites man." It may be kind of sad, too; you might need a hopeful twist.
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‘While the rest of the world begins to lose their memories. A sole teenager starts to learn things about the world that they had never dreamed of.’
Right, how will this "lucky" teen save existence and all our memories??
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A research scientist races against time to stop two earth-altering events: the rapid deterioration of planet Earth’s gravitational field and her family from completely drifting apart.
I was going for it as ironic logline ending. A family break-up is not going to cause a planet-wide disaster, but it's certainly a big deal for the family!
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Whole human beeing fight for the lost planet earth against the majestically, though, imperfect fallen angel.
When all of humanity fights for planet earth against an imperfect fallen angel...
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The disfigured adopted son of a faith healer conspires to run away from home after he falls in love with glam rock and a beautiful yet rebellious crossdresser named Esmeralda in 1980s Nevada.
I agree it is two adventures in one. Which one will you want to emphasize?
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When a brilliant but unruly CIA agent is unexpectedly assigned to find a missing Chinese dissident, he soon realises all is not what it seems. Not knowing who to trust, his loyalties to friends, family and country are tested to the limit.
(I tried this for brevity's sake) When a brilliant but unruly CIA agent is unexpectedly assigned to find a missing Chinese dissident, his trust and loyalty to his friends, family and country will be tested to the limit.
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A hipster quest for “transcendent” duck tacos is derailed when a failed chef turned health inspector closes the duck truck down.
The pursuit of the tacos is the goal :-) Zen hipsters!
