moviefreak81
Samurai · 675 points
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He has to fulfill his vow, and carry heavy cross (like Jesus) to the church's altar.
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Thanks dpg, learning a lot with your comments. Your revision makes sense regarding protagonist's original, intentional/objective goal. One thing that crossed my mind is that he must win their acceptance to survive, might be inaccurate story-wise (The might feel his…
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Hmmm this one is become trickier than I thought originally... When a stubborn Father block the church entrance, a simple devout have to make sense of the ensuing confusion with press, church and population if he is to fulfill his…
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Indeed, a protagonist that isn't driving the plot forward (reactive) is not worth being the protagonist. That reminded me of Harrison Ford in the Fugitive. There is a constant 'survival' pressure on him, but still he is making all the…
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Nir, the obstacle standing is the rugged roads as dpg pointed out, but I think the biggest obstacle that was clear to me when watching the movie was the relationship between the drivers. That stood out with the resilience (and/or…
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Hmmm yes.. perhaps the proposed logline format won't do much good for this genre indeed. Or in the very least, it doesn't sound as catchy...
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This is based on "The Given Word", brazilian movie from the 60's. A simple man makes a vow to Santa Barbara to carry a heavy wooden cross up to the altar, but when reaching there, the Father do not let…
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Thanks Nir.. I was in doubt how much to put in from the plot. Obviously the inciting incident would be the killing of his friend, but then, should we give in the dilluted penicillin in the log line? I mean,…
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hmmm good points.? Your logline makes absolute sense. One thing that crosses my mind tho, is that usually in filmes, when a character is seeking revenge, he is not (usually) in position of danger. In Unforgiven, does Munny feels in…
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Thanks Richiev... nailed it!