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Penpusher · 35 points

265 points to Logliner

on A young girl has the ability to create reality through her sketches, now her mother must protect her child from secretive agencies that want to exploit her power.

An interesting idea. The phrase "secretive agencies" seems like it could be worded in a more interesting way. Maybe a more specific agency or someone specific from one of those agencies?
on A lonely vacuum salesman, unsure of his true calling, happens upon love and struggles to walk the line between his familiar life and the extraordinary.

You are right! Thank you :). This is my first log line and I'm very new to screenwriting and creative writing in general but I love storytelling and films. I hope to get better! How is this revised version? A…