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Who gave the protagonist the order to train them? The inciting incident is that the protagonist found superior humans, developed by aliens ( which is the creepy secret ). What is the new specie's intention? Do they want to replace…

All right, here is my final version: To save her people from extinction, a researcher and her robot seek endangered natives in a terrifying jungle, where they have to fight a dangerous super-intelligence, before they can get their desired gene-samples.…

How about this? To save her people from extinction, a researcher and her robot are sent to seek natives in a terrifying jungle, where they have to fight a dangerous super-intelligence, before they can get their gene-samples. Does that make…

>>>> The plot is still unclear. So this superintelligence attacks her after she begins her research and wasn't even known to humanity before any of this? It has been known, but it has not been expected in that area (the…

The dangerous super-intelligence is the antagonist/main obstacle, which impedes the researcher to reach her goal. In the terrifying jungle it is hard to survive. That sounds enough for a good adventure, but the dangerous super-intelligence makes it even more difficult...…