NicolasJ

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A story based on the life of Marek Edelman, the last leader of the Warsaw Ghetto Uprising: When the Nazis set up the ghetto, orphaned Jewish errand boy decides to stay with his beloved and print the underground press, but when the Nazis start liquidating the ghetto, he saves his comrades, becoming the last leader of the Warsaw Ghetto Uprising.

April 15, 2020
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A reckless, arrogant young Jewish hospital messenger rescues his relatives from the liquidation of the ghetto and becomes the last leader of the Warsaw ghetto uprising.

February 18, 2020

on A story based on the life of Marek Edelman, the last leader of the Warsaw Ghetto Uprising: When the Nazis set up the ghetto, orphaned Jewish errand boy decides to stay with his beloved and print the underground press, but when the Nazis start liquidating the ghetto, he saves his comrades, becoming the last leader of the Warsaw Ghetto Uprising.

Hi, English is not my mother tongue so I apologize for any mistakes! I'd appreciate your hints! I have a problem with the transformation of a hero, the point is that he changed from an arrogant, careless, insignificant orphan into…
on A reckless, arrogant young Jewish hospital messenger rescues his relatives from the liquidation of the ghetto and becomes the last leader of the Warsaw ghetto uprising.

DPG: Thank you for such a great answer! I will do as you wrote! Thank you for such words of support and enthusiasm, I also think I need to tell his story, and I have been reaserch to her since…
on A reckless, arrogant young Jewish hospital messenger rescues his relatives from the liquidation of the ghetto and becomes the last leader of the Warsaw ghetto uprising.

Thank you all for the answers, I'm going to work on improving the logline with your comments, I will post the corrected versions soon!
on A reckless, arrogant young Jewish hospital messenger rescues his relatives from the liquidation of the ghetto and becomes the last leader of the Warsaw ghetto uprising.

Hi,?English is not my native language so I apologize for the mistakes. This is the first version of the logline I'm working on for the war hero script. I will be very grateful for your suggestions

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