Patrick

Logliner · 410 points

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19 loglines
4 reviews

After watching his parents being brutally murdered, a young boy finds a magical portal to an alien planet, where he must learn their ways so he can avenge their deaths.

March 2, 2013
A renowned FBI agent must stop the world’s most powerful man before he brings the planet to the brink of environmental destruction.

February 26, 2013
A, no bullshit, hotshot archeologist comes face to face with a coldblooded tomb raider in a struggle to claim discovery of a lost Egyptian city of immeasurable wealth.

February 21, 2013
Wyatt Johnson is a washed up arcehologist who discovers a lost Egyptian city of immeasurable riches and must fight off the world famous tomb raider Karl Freidrick, who will stop at nothing to claim the discovery for himself.

February 20, 2013
Leonard and Sheldon avert a nuclear disaster, as Amy tries to cure Raj of his social anxiety around women, while Bernadette throws Howard a birthday to remember.

February 8, 2013
After running away from home, a 14 year old boy finds a magical coin which sends him back in time, only to discover that he is the long lost son of the infamous pirate Blackbeard.

February 3, 2013
A no bullshit FBI agent is in a race against time, as he pursuits a corrupt heir to an energy empire, who secretly conspires with the Russian government to melt the worlds ice caps in search of oil.

January 25, 2013
A world renown Cambridge Professor, takes on her new job as at a prestigious high school with a bad reputation, while she struggles as a recently single mother of two in Los Angeles.

January 22, 2013
Alice Archibald, a former Cambridge Professor, takes on her new job as a high school English teacher, must put up with with arrogant co-workers and idiotic students, as she tries to forget her recently failed marriage without going nuts.

January 21, 2013
When Alice finally realizes her students are all idiots and her co-workers are losers, she decidest to get together with Amanda and Megan for some after school drinks.

January 19, 2013

on A rebellious teenage girl and her brother discover a time-traveling chaise lounge in their Grandmother’s attic- trapped in the past and facing King Tut’s wrath, they find help from an unlikely source- their teenage Grandmother in 1956.

The idea is good. The logline itself is on log run-on sentence, and should be double checked for grammar prior to any official substitution.
on An elite member of the galactic Special Forces is wrongly convicted for a crime committed by a congressman’s son. His attorney must convince the congressman of his innocence, while he serves his sentence at an experimental prison camp.

Thanks for your comments. I've posted an update.
on Oscar remembers his past and wonders why he is still a loser. That is until he meets the woman of his dreams.

I really appreciate the assistance Gentlemen. How about this one? During the course of his routine loser life, Oscar, meets the woman of his dreams, and must convince himself and his friends that she's the one.
on Abducted as a small child by his fugitive mother, a now college hoops star discovers a posthumous letter written by his long-lost father, inspiring him and his under-the-radar teammates to a shot at championship glory.

Great logline. I think using both posthumous and long-lost father could be seen as redundant but all in all very good.