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To The Greater Glory of God – Beginning before the Nativity, extending through the Crucifixion and Resurrection, and using authentic biblical sites in Israel and the surrounding areas, this inspirational drama brings to life the story of Jesus Christ, as recorded in the Scriptures.

April 10, 2023
“The truth hurts. But sometimes it’s inspirational, scary, sad, funny or anywhere in between. After witnessing the physical and spiritual persecution of humanity, a thirty year old man gradually teams up with others to liberate the earth by combating the sinister forces of darkness.”

November 2, 2022
God did not abandon man after his fall. On the contrary, God calls him and in a mysterious way heralds the coming victory over evil and his restoration from his fall. This is the first announcement of the Messiah and Redeemer, of a battle between the serpent and the Woman, and of the final victory of her descendant – Jesus Christ.

January 18, 2022
Through the Devil’s envy, sin and death came into the world. Therefore, God sent his Son into the world so that through his death and resurrection, the world might be saved.

September 20, 2021
“In order to help create an international antiterrorism taskforce, the D. o. D. Director of Psychological Operations Dr. Samantha Ryan struggles to overcome her ex husband and the terrorists with whom he is associated.”

August 3, 2016
Following a career-defining launch of a state of the art submarine, a high-ranking U. S. government official finds her life turned upside down after she learns that her estranged husband is hunting her.

July 30, 2016
When they cry to the Lord because of oppressors, he will send them a savior, and will defend and deliver them.

July 30, 2016
While working under cover on a state-of-the-art submarine, a United States government agent learns that her former husband intends to “terminate her with extreme prejudice”.

March 6, 2016
While serving on a new naval submarine during its trial runs, a U. S. government agent discovers that her ex-husband is out to kill her.

November 29, 2015
Set aboard the submarine Leviathan D. S. V. (Deep Submergence Vehicle), this novel focuses on the early years of the International Multiple Threat Alert Command and its defense arm, the United Earth Defense Command. In the early 21st century, the United States was attacked by forces from Al-Qaeda. The United Earth Defense Command commissions the construction of the submarine Leviathan D. S. V. to keep the peace and explore the vast oceans on Earth.

October 17, 2015

on Through the Devil’s envy, sin and death came into the world. Therefore, God sent his Son into the world so that through his death and resurrection, the world might be saved.

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on Through the Devil’s envy, sin and death came into the world. Therefore, God sent his Son into the world so that through his death and resurrection, the world might be saved.

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on Following a career-defining launch of a state of the art submarine, a high-ranking U. S. government official finds her life turned upside down after she learns that her estranged husband is hunting her.

I created the following log line with this "log line generator" http://hammonscripts.com/high_concept_logline_generator.html In order to help create an international antiterrorism taskforce, The D. o. D. Director of Psychological Operations Dr. Samantha Ryan struggles to overcome her ex husband and the…
on Following a career-defining launch of a state of the art submarine, a high-ranking U. S. government official finds her life turned upside down after she learns that her estranged husband is hunting her.

OK. Let me explain exactly what is going on. Trying to write a log line for this story is not easy for me. Liam Dunham (b. April 4, 1960; 56 yrs. old) is a former C. I. A. special agent…
on When they cry to the Lord because of oppressors, he will send them a savior, and will defend and deliver them.

It is from the following - Isaiah 19:20 New Revised Standard Version, Anglicised Catholic Edition (NRSVACE) 20?It will be a sign and a witness to the Lord of hosts in the land of Egypt; when they cry to the Lord…
on While working under cover on a state-of-the-art submarine, a United States government agent learns that her former husband intends to “terminate her with extreme prejudice”.

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on I sent out a pitch to two seperate production companies. Both passed on it. I need help writing one that will work.

The reason why it is called the "Titanic" is because it is the world's biggest submarine at 1,601 ft. long and 13 decks.
on I sent out a pitch to two seperate production companies. Both passed on it. I need help writing one that will work.

The name of the film is Titanic: D. S. V. Set between 2001 ? the present?; Titanic D. S. V.? mixes the following: 1. Action 2. Drama 3. Light Comedy 4. Military 5. Naval Procedural 6. Police procedural I never…
on I sent out a pitch to two seperate production companies. Both passed on it. I need help writing one that will work.

I published the first twenty or so pages of my screenplay on http://www.scriptbuddy.com. I would appreciate it if anybody could review what I did so far. I am sure others would appreciate your thoughts as well. This is not spam.…
on Former government agent Liam Dunham is determined to kill his ex-wife Samantha Ryan by any means possible. He becomes like the very terrorists he was trained to fight. Samantha Ryan is a DoD Agency Director determined to protect her son from him, the estranged and monster of an ex husband while trying to prevent an international incident in the process.

I needed to add an ironic factor into the log line. However, now, it sounds rather off? Any suggestions?

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