RachelBlahgs

Penpusher · 40 points

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2 loglines
2 reviews

After her friend accidentally discovers time travel through memory research, a habitually cautious woman risks her sanity and ultimately her father’s life by returning to her early teen years to prevent her Charlston-socialite mother’s murder.

April 12, 2013
As attempt to belatedly connect with her estranged and recently deceased sister, a woman goes on an experimental vacation trip with the sister’s avant-garde theater troupe, in which a real-time play unfolds as the itinerary progresses. When she witnesses a murder, then narrowly escapes being a murder victim herself, her trip becomes a life-and-death struggle to determine what’s part of the script and what is real.

April 9, 2013

on As attempt to belatedly connect with her estranged and recently deceased sister, a woman goes on an experimental vacation trip with the sister’s avant-garde theater troupe, in which a real-time play unfolds as the itinerary progresses. When she witnesses a murder, then narrowly escapes being a murder victim herself, her trip becomes a life-and-death struggle to determine what’s part of the script and what is real.

Nice, thanks PeterMack - I like the brevity. I'll work with that and repost.
on As attempt to belatedly connect with her estranged and recently deceased sister, a woman goes on an experimental vacation trip with the sister’s avant-garde theater troupe, in which a real-time play unfolds as the itinerary progresses. When she witnesses a murder, then narrowly escapes being a murder victim herself, her trip becomes a life-and-death struggle to determine what’s part of the script and what is real.

I'm going to judge my own logline here! :) Broken rule: it's two sentences! Back to the drawing board...