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on A young girl who has lived her entire life in a laboratory as the subject of an experiment, is kidnapped by a scientist who wants her to have a few days of a real childhood before she dies.

Sounds like a very touching concept. I think the logline could be improved by explaining why the scientist has chosen this moment to rescue her (make it clear if she is days away from death), and who the scientist is…