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After the discovery of a file containing orchestrated events that lead to a discharged solider and his military gang’s demise. The crew must race against time through the downtown streets of Miami to escape the CIA’s manhunt, leading to a series of unexpected events, including murder. Bounded by this ill fate the gang must pull off their notorious plan or risk the reality of dying.
Ok I will rewrite and re-post thanks.
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After the discovery of a file containing orchestrated events that lead to a discharged solider and his military gang’s demise. The crew must race against time through the downtown streets of Miami to escape the CIA’s manhunt, leading to a series of unexpected events, including murder. Bounded by this ill fate the gang must pull off their notorious plan or risk the reality of dying.
haha no he's not smuggling money because its his patriotic duty.There is a reason for its not just greed, but isn't that too much to include in a logline? or maybe i should take out the smuggling of the money…
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After the discovery of a file containing orchestrated events that lead to a discharged solider and his military gang’s demise. The crew must race against time through the downtown streets of Miami to escape the CIA’s manhunt, leading to a series of unexpected events, including murder. Bounded by this ill fate the gang must pull off their notorious plan or risk the reality of dying.
Does this work better? A dishonorable discharged solider is torn between the love for his country and vengeance when he stumbles upon a future murder plot of himself and his military brothers by rogue CIA agents. The team must pull…
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After the discovery of a file containing orchestrated events that lead to a discharged solider and his military gang’s demise. The crew must race against time through the downtown streets of Miami to escape the CIA’s manhunt, leading to a series of unexpected events, including murder. Bounded by this ill fate the gang must pull off their notorious plan or risk the reality of dying.
Ok DPG, does this sense more sense to you? Deacon a dishonorable discharged solider is torn between the love for his country and vengeance when he stumbles upon a future murder plot of himself and his military brothers by rogue…
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After the discovery of a file containing orchestrated events that lead to a discharged solider and his military gang’s demise. The crew must race against time through the downtown streets of Miami to escape the CIA’s manhunt, leading to a series of unexpected events, including murder. Bounded by this ill fate the gang must pull off their notorious plan or risk the reality of dying.
I didn't include why the Cia want them dead because that would be giving too much away.That was apart of the mystery. But please let me know what you think.
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After the discovery of a file containing orchestrated events that lead to a discharged solider and his military gang’s demise. The crew must race against time through the downtown streets of Miami to escape the CIA’s manhunt, leading to a series of unexpected events, including murder. Bounded by this ill fate the gang must pull off their notorious plan or risk the reality of dying.
Does these two make more sense? When a dishonorable discharged solider stumbles upon a future murder plot of himself and his military brothers by rogue CIA agents. The team must pull their skills and resources together to defeat their assassins.…
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After the discovery of a file containing orchestrated events that lead to a discharged solider and his military gang’s demise. The crew must race against time through the downtown streets of Miami to escape the CIA’s manhunt, leading to a series of unexpected events, including murder. Bounded by this ill fate the gang must pull off their notorious plan or risk the reality of dying.
So with both loglines I have posted you still have NO IDEA what the story is about?Perhaps you just don't like the idea.And you stating that the CIA hunting down people in Miami is not credible, is not true nor…
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After the discovery of a file containing orchestrated events that lead to a discharged solider and his military gang’s demise. The crew must race against time through the downtown streets of Miami to escape the CIA’s manhunt, leading to a series of unexpected events, including murder. Bounded by this ill fate the gang must pull off their notorious plan or risk the reality of dying.
The evidence wasn't just simply just left around, it was leaked. The evidence are the characters, they are the only souls left who still pose a threat to the truth and the characters are not all so innocent themselves.Deacon is…
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After the discovery of a file containing orchestrated events that lead to a discharged solider and his military gang’s demise. The crew must race against time through the downtown streets of Miami to escape the CIA’s manhunt, leading to a series of unexpected events, including murder. Bounded by this ill fate the gang must pull off their notorious plan or risk the reality of dying.
I understand what you mean in vagueness, especially when I say "orchestrated events".I use that word because it would be lengthy to describe how each person was planned to die, and I dont know how else you to explain that…
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After the discovery of a file containing orchestrated events that lead to a discharged solider and his military gang’s demise. The crew must race against time through the downtown streets of Miami to escape the CIA’s manhunt, leading to a series of unexpected events, including murder. Bounded by this ill fate the gang must pull off their notorious plan or risk the reality of dying.
Thanks DPG. The objective goal is pull off their plan and be able to escape with their lives. I am just really have a touch time writing a logline for this script. It consists of so many relateble issues we…
