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Sleepless Judge is a comedy action about a corrupt prosecutor who became victim of corruption himself after a wealthy banker who has an eye on his wife let him fall into an ambush after which he gets in jail for bank robbery, to prove his innocence Chris must find withheld evidence, for achieving this goal he needs help from some other immates who are also victims of his corruption practices.

December 9, 2012

on Sleepless Judge is a comedy action about a corrupt prosecutor who became victim of corruption himself after a wealthy banker who has an eye on his wife let him fall into an ambush after which he gets in jail for bank robbery, to prove his innocence Chris must find withheld evidence, for achieving this goal he needs help from some other immates who are also victims of his corruption practices.

Yes, English is not my first language. I'm living in Holland. I have only one last question to you Debbiemoon. What genre will fit to this story? I was thinking (as you can read in the first post) about a…
on Sleepless Judge is a comedy action about a corrupt prosecutor who became victim of corruption himself after a wealthy banker who has an eye on his wife let him fall into an ambush after which he gets in jail for bank robbery, to prove his innocence Chris must find withheld evidence, for achieving this goal he needs help from some other immates who are also victims of his corruption practices.

Debbiemoon, what do you think about this: A corrupt prosecutor who become victim of corruption himself must find witheld evidence that will prove his innocence that he can only with the help of his victims. But what do you think…
on Sleepless Judge is a comedy action about a corrupt prosecutor who became victim of corruption himself after a wealthy banker who has an eye on his wife let him fall into an ambush after which he gets in jail for bank robbery, to prove his innocence Chris must find withheld evidence, for achieving this goal he needs help from some other immates who are also victims of his corruption practices.

You are both right. I changed and shortened it to: A corrupt prosecutor who became victim of corruption himself must find withheld evidence that he can only get with the help of his victims. Is this better?