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By trying to save the station house from demolition, a lonely girl hopes to keep her father’s memory alive and gain her mother’s love.

March 25, 2014
A psychology student has a theory to rid himself of his horrific childhood memories and returning to his small hometown he tests them out on his unsuspecting girlfriend, but when a bored local girl sets her sights on him as her escape from the town, it puts a cleaver into his plan.

February 19, 2014

on Seeking to profit from the rich and powerful and solve their financial woes, a group of golf caddies begin an underground crime syndicate in their resort hometown.

I love the title! And I like the idea for a movie, I get a feel of some Caddyshack comedy and Happy Gilmore good feel.
on After discovering he’s genetically incapable of love, a cautious soon-to-be dad must race to California for an underground gene therapy procedure before he’s thwarted by the Department of Bioethics.

I understand the story to be, a man who thought he was incapable of love and blamed his genes but discovers in the underground that he was capable of love all along. A journey of discovery. Or, he is an…
on Fleeing bank robbers attempt to deliver stolen loot to a corrupt politician on the GW bridge, but when things go wrong…they take hostages.

So this scandal is the backdrop that unexpectedly causes these robbers to take hostages. I think it could be an interesting and potentially exciting movie, cat and mouse in a huge traffic jam. I'm intreged to know how they get…
on When the human race is forced to evacuate Earth, it leaves behind an aging, osteoporotic millionaire, who finds solace and purpose in the company of an autistic child.

Osteoporotic, I don't want to have to refer to a dictionary when reading a logline. I would see this movie based on your re-write. I don't see that being a millionaire has anything to do with the story, or the…
on A psychology student has a theory to rid himself of his horrific childhood memories and returning to his small hometown he tests them out on his unsuspecting girlfriend, but when a bored local girl sets her sights on him as her escape from the town, it puts a cleaver into his plan.

Thanks Halli, leaving out the girlfriend had never entered my mind, but you're correct. Thanks for a new outlook to this agonizing process. Thanks Adele93, thanks for you input too, it all helps.
on A group of people spends weekend in a cottage where they lost one friend ten years ago but they don’t know that two of them have been in a secret relationship and it was that accident that had brought them together.

I'm getting a bit of "The Big Chill" here. I love those movies where a group of old friends are brought together for a weekendand and secrets come out. But I'm not sure if that's what you're trying to get…

By trying to save the station house from demolition, a lonely girl hopes to keep her father’s memory alive and gain her mother’s love.

A psychology student has a theory to rid himself of his horrific childhood memories and returning to his small hometown he tests them out on his unsuspecting girlfriend, but when a bored local girl sets her sights on him as her escape from the town, it puts a cleaver into his plan.