Stardustfortheearthlings

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4 loglines
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When a magical spirit reveals the world’s destructive fate, an introverted high school girl must flee her privileged upbringing and journey through an impoverished land to find a saviour, which she later learns is actually herself, and confront the powerful government of the city before the world collapses beneath her feet.

July 21, 2020
Ramona, an introverted high school girl, unknowingly helps a disguised magical spirit, and in return is awakened to the inevitable destructive fate of her world. Ramona must flee her seemingly protected, privileged city and upbringing, to journey through an impoverished but enchanting land to reach the world’s one true saviour, who is to be found on top of a distant mountain.

July 20, 2020
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When a timid reef fish, discovers the world is about to be destroyed by a single ordinary human, he must find a way to stop them, and survive a treacherous journey to the surface world.

July 5, 2020
The world is about to be destroyed by none other than an ordinary human, and the only one who knows about it is an unwillingly chosen fish.

July 3, 2020

on Ramona, an introverted high school girl, unknowingly helps a disguised magical spirit, and in return is awakened to the inevitable destructive fate of her world. Ramona must flee her seemingly protected, privileged city and upbringing, to journey through an impoverished but enchanting land to reach the world’s one true saviour, who is to be found on top of a distant mountain.

Thank you all for the feedback. It is very much appreciated. I have made some adjustments. Let me know what you think... When a magical spirit reveals the world’s destructive fate, an introverted high school girl must flee her privileged…
on The world is about to be destroyed by none other than an ordinary human, and the only one who knows about it is an unwillingly chosen fish.

Thanks so much for the advice. I will make some changes to see if it works more. There is definitely and environmental message, do you think it comes across in the logline well/interestingly enough?