Stephanie Basile

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on A 13 year old little brother had grown up around the lives of crooked cops, gangsters,corrupted politicians, a broken family, and a brother who is hated by them all. Will the little fella help his brother, abandon him, or do absolutely nothing?

As said above, the main problem with this logline is that we have absolutely no sense of what the protagonist's goal is. Also with the last part I feel it would be more effective if it was just an ultimatum.…