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on When his wife and daughter are both kidnapped and held in different locations, an emotionally stunted man must choose which one to save in a race against time.

This is pretty clean. You've got a problem, a time constraint, a villain, a proactive goal, and a protagonist with some depth. Your villain and time constraint are vague. And emotionally stunted sounds kind of weird (war vet, PTSD, BPD)...…