torgodog

Samurai · 590 points

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27 loglines
9 reviews

A man blackmails a young woman he’ll inform the shelter and care program about her ongoing drug habit, leaving her homeless, unless she becomes his mistress.

May 6, 2020
When a young homeless woman is confronted by an evil older male blackmailer, who holds the key to her secret, she must choose between her dignity and a roof over her head. (this is for a scene, but I’m requested to submit a logline for it).

May 5, 2020
When a man wakes up in an unfamiliar bar with no memories, he is compelled to solve the mystery and reconsider his own relationship with death.

January 3, 2020
After starting a commune in the aftermath of Woodstock, a group of hippies has to resort to stealing from a hermit chicken farmer. All goes well until they kill his favorite hen… Now it’s his time to kill.

September 20, 2019
When a shelter bully blackmails a recovering junkie, the leader of a small group of homeless takes a heroic stand to protect her.

August 30, 2018
After a group of homeless friends moves into a train station to escape a shelter bully, its leader takes a stand to protect them and give them the best New Year.

August 15, 2018
A lawsuit for his wife’s injury offers a homeless group leader a ticket out— until a member of his flock threatens to testify. Now he must resort to extreme measure to stop him.

June 6, 2016
This is not a logline but a question. Will it be admissible for a logline for a SERIES be longer than a standard of 30 words (or so)?

April 21, 2016
When a Talent Agency for Dogs is faced with imminent demise, a flamboyant receptionist has only 48 hours to convince the mid divorce agent, win the heart of a psychotic client and train his pooch to overcome stage fright in order to realize his dream and save the company.

April 21, 2016
When an Animal Talent Agency has only 48 hours to find the right talent for a psychotic client or face demise, a flamboyant receptionist obsessed with making his dog a star sees an opportunity. He “just” has to convince the mid divorce agent, win the client’s heart and train his pooch to overcome stage fright.

April 21, 2016

on When a young homeless woman is confronted by an evil older male blackmailer, who holds the key to her secret, she must choose between her dignity and a roof over her head. (this is for a scene, but I’m requested to submit a logline for it).

A man blackmails a young woman he'll inform the shelter and care program about her ongoing drug habit, leaving her homeless, unless she becomes his mistress.
on When a man wakes up in an unfamiliar bar with no memories, he is compelled to solve the mystery and reconsider his own relationship with death.

Does refer to the movie already made. "When a man wakes up with no memories in the world where people interact through a game of Rock. Paper. Scissors. , he must solve the mystery of his predicament."
on When a man wakes up in an unfamiliar bar with no memories, he is compelled to solve the mystery and reconsider his own relationship with death. ★ Accepted

When a man wakes up with no memories in the world where people interact through a game of Rock. Paper. Scissors. , he must solve the mystery of his predicament and consider his relationship with death.
on When a man wakes up in an unfamiliar bar with no memories, he is compelled to solve the mystery and reconsider his own relationship with death.

When a man wakes up in world where people communicate through a game of Rock, Paper, Scissors, he is compelled to solve the mystery and reconsider?his relationship with death.
on After a group of homeless friends moves into a train station to escape a shelter bully, its leader takes a stand to protect them and give them the best New Year.

When a shelter bully blackmails a recovering junkie, the leader of a small group of homeless takes a heroic stand to protect her.
on A lawsuit for his wife’s injury offers a homeless group leader a ticket out— until a member of his flock threatens to testify. Now he must resort to extreme measure to stop him.

When a leader of a group takes a stand for a woman in his flock he is forced to re-examine his values in?cruel, merciless world of the homeless in which some fall all the way to the bottom, while?a few…
on When a hooker attempts to steal a wallet from a drunken john, she accidentally makes a horrific discovery — the couple is not alone in a shabby room of a love hotel.

Those are all good points. I will try to rework it. "Love Hotel" is something that is very common in Asia (the story takes place in Tokyo), and it is a place where people go for a tryst and pay…
on When well-mannered Japanese woman notices a an enormous boogger hanging out of a nose of her American date, she has to make a tough choice either to tell him and jeopardize brewing romance or endure in disgust.

It actually plays very well, and it's nine minutes long. I guarantee you'd shit your pants from laughing if you see that thing. I feel unashamed praising it, since it isn't mine, I am just assisting in submitting it to…
on An assassin hired by means of text messages to kill a prominent mobster discovers he has been set up by the daughter of one of his father’s hits in a complex scheme of revenge.

I agree -- text messages or not, it isn't all that important. I posted a new version literally minutes ago that echos what you have suggested. "When a meticulous hitman is hired to kill a prominent mobster by means of…