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When his estranged father passes away, an aimless office worker must go on a word jumble puzzle themed treasure hunt to claim his inheritance and save the family home within 48 hours

September 10, 2020
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A struggling writer’s fictional creations hold an intervention when real life responsibilities threaten to make him walk away from his dreams

September 8, 2020
When the mysterious knight who slaughtered his village returns, a distrustful werewolf reluctantly teams with a rebellious human princess to track the knight down before he starts a war between humans and fantasy creatures.

August 24, 2019
A lyncanthropic warrior reluctantly teams with a human princess after a mysterious knight, who slaughtered the warrior’s village years ago, returns and begins attacking humans.

June 13, 2019
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In an alternate 1930s metropolis, an airplane mechanic turned cyborg and an heiress turned adventurer must form a team to battle gangsters who have stolen experimental technology and plan to take over the city.

June 12, 2019
A shy movie fan and his crush are magically pulled into a 1930s adventure film and must race a power gangster to a legendary treasure in order to return to the real world.

June 12, 2019
In a time of great tension between fantastical creature and men, a werewolf warrior, trying to follow in his ancestors’ footsteps, reluctantly teams up with a human princess to track down the mysterious knight who slaughtered the warrior’s village when he was a child.

June 12, 2019

on When medicine and science fail, and the only way to get humanity back on track is to rewind the clock, a group of historians and storytellers sit down to rewrite history

I like the concept involving time travel and historians, but what part do the storytellers play? Its missing a conflict and a sense of urgency also. Do they need to create a time machine before a certain date or before…
on When a sentient video game character falls in love with the real-life player, she must get rid of the other characters to gain the player’s affections, even if that means rewriting the game script.

That's an awesome idea! Agree with the other comments that some details should be fleshed out Depending on which genre you wanted to use, action, romance, etc. (both sound great), maybe she's trying to get the player's attention but he's…
on A lyncanthropic warrior reluctantly teams with a human princess after a mysterious knight, who slaughtered the warrior’s village years ago, returns and begins attacking humans.

Thanks a lot! First time meeting in the story. Ah, I'd say more, but I don't want to give too much away
on A lyncanthropic warrior reluctantly teams with a human princess after a mysterious knight, who slaughtered the warrior’s village years ago, returns and begins attacking humans.

Apologies for the very late reply. Just fleshing out the idea for the story. I have several drafts of an outline for it completed and am ready to write it once I finish revisions on several other projects. Ah, gotcha.…
on A lyncanthropic warrior reluctantly teams with a human princess after a mysterious knight, who slaughtered the warrior’s village years ago, returns and begins attacking humans.

Thanks. Definitely agree!
on A lyncanthropic warrior reluctantly teams with a human princess after a mysterious knight, who slaughtered the warrior’s village years ago, returns and begins attacking humans.

Apologies for the very late reply. It does indeed. Thanks a lot!

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