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When seven actors arrive ready to shoot a horror movie but the location is desert. Soon they start dying just as the script describes.
Interesting. If you were able to hint at more of the drama behind this particular group of people then I think it could be even more interesting. Right now, it sounds like a group of random actors being killed off,…
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A troubled teen is mysteriously abducted and transported to a secluded training facility, where he and a band of juvenile misfits encounter an otherworldly enemy in a struggle for survival.
It might be more interesting if the teen is not troubled - abducted teens that are not "troubled" is against the norm...and therefore more compelling. Maybe you could make the group "girls" to differentiate it more from the maze runner...…
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A young American executive with strong family bonds seeks revenge for her sister’s murder only to be confronted with the realization that the American Revolution never ended and her family secretly fights for the British side.
It's great to get some feedback and see there's some more work to be done before I've got this one fully worked out! You've given me some great things to think about - thanks!
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9 years after the sanguinary massacre of the royal family of demons, planned by the United States, Barbara, one of the two sisters who escaped the massacre, seeks revenge and is in search to find her 10 year old sister, who was later abducted by the government of the United States, because of her sister’s godly black magic abilities that could be used to turn the United States into a worldwide empire and to resurrect Goddess Isis, of Babylon. 17 year old terrorist Barbara forces the son of the president of the United States to betray his own country and join her on the expedition to find her sister, which leads to the revelation of the grotesque plans the United States (Illuminati) has up its sleeve and the end of everything.
"17 year old terrorist Barbara forces the son of the president of the United States to betray his own country and join her on the expedition to find her sister, which leads to the revelation of the grotesque plans the…
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After he’s framed for murder, a young man must go on the run from the CIA with a ruthless assassin in order to shut down the black market crime syndicate that killed his parents and stop a devastating terrorist attack.
Why is he running from the CIA for a murder charge?
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After discovering he’s been raised under an assumed identity, a prized college recruit’s championship hopes are threatened by his felonious, on the lam mother when he sets out to find his missing dad.
I'm struggling with the link between his championship hopes and looking for his dad...is there a correlation that you could clarify? Best of luck!
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“When a traumatized family moves in to a new house on a remote island and gets hauted by a bloodthirsty dead plague doctor—an overprotective mother —must find a way for her and her family to survive and force the plague doctor to cross over to the other side.
The fact that the mother is overprotective doesn't really add anything but length to the logline....Now, if she was an unbelieving mother then I could see some added conflict...good luck!
