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When King George III descends into madness, court physicians attempt to cure him with torturous remedies while his dissolute son conspires to usurp the throne.
Thank you for posting your method, It?s quite insightful. My only concern- I don?t know who the protagonist is.I like how this logline enables me to imagine the various forces driving the story; makes me want to know how it plays out.
Thank you for posting your method, It?s quite insightful. My only concern- I don?t know who the protagonist is.
See lessI like how this logline enables me to imagine the various forces driving the story; makes me want to know how it plays out.
After a plane crash strands him on a remote island, a hard-driving Fedex executive, who never had time for a personal life, now has all the time in the world to merely survive.
deborah_b:Respectfully noted.?? We all respond differently.? I think the emotional and thematic "juice" exists in the Act 3, in the resolution of the "B"? (relationship) story.? But that is beyond the scope of a logline.In crafting loglines for movies based upon scripts by others, I am sometimes torRead more
deborah_b:
Respectfully noted.?? We all respond differently.? I think the emotional and thematic “juice” exists in the Act 3, in the resolution of the “B”? (relationship) story.? But that is beyond the scope of a logline.
In crafting loglines for movies based upon scripts by others, I am sometimes torn between a logline that reflects how I wish the plot had been framed and how I perceive the plot was actually framed.
Mike Pedley:
“Never makes time…” is an interesting word choice.? Ultimately, characters in reel life and real life have to own their choices.? And the Tom Hanks character is very proactive in his job, a gung-ho, high energy leader of others.? But it is often the case that initially characters cave into the expectations of others, or the demand of their jobs.? That’s the choice they make, but they rationalize that they had no choice.
See lessA total loser works for a ruthless Vegas casino boss to jinx gamblers. But after he falls in love with a cocktail waitress, gamblers become winners instead. Now he must save his Lady Luck from the boss’s murderous wrath.
I think your version is pretty good. One sentence makes it clunky; this is as far as I could get-When love debuffs his jinx, a hapless employee must save his lady from the ruthless casino boss
I think your version is pretty good. One sentence makes it clunky; this is as far as I could get-
See lessWhen love debuffs his jinx, a hapless employee must save his lady from the ruthless casino boss