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A good cop working as a mole to bring down a mobster and a corrupt cop working as a mole for the mobster struggle to unmask each other.
thedarkhourse:My first version was exactly as you suggested.However, I believe that a logline should be immediately and entirely clear on the first read. An industry reader should not have to read a logline more than once to? understand what the story is about.? Maybe most readers would immediatelyRead more
thedarkhourse:
My first version was exactly as you suggested.
However, I believe that a logline should be immediately and entirely clear on the first read. An industry reader should not have to read a logline more than once to? understand what the story is about.? Maybe most readers would immediately understand the story concept with the version you suggested.? But just in case, as an insurance policy, I opted to pad my version with two more words for the sake of clarity.? It is certainly arguable that my padding was superfluous.
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yeah, exactly About Time - check on imdb
yeah, exactly About Time – check on imdb
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Great film and good choice. Could also be interesting to prioritise the love interest as the 'A' plot: After landing a writing assignment, a 15 year old aspiring writer falls in love with a roady following the band he was tasked to cover and must woo her away from the clutches of the lead singer.
Great film and good choice. Could also be interesting to prioritise the love interest as the ‘A’ plot:
After landing a writing assignment, a 15 year old aspiring writer falls in love with a roady following the band he was tasked to cover and must woo her away from the clutches of the lead singer.
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