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  1. Posted: November 4, 2018In: Examples

    “When his evil sister captures his homeland and he is enslaved on a junk planet, a Norse god prince must escape his prison, raise an army and defeat his sadistic sibling.”

    TinaMatzat Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 28, 2018 at 1:22 am

    What is a norse god?

    What is a norse god?

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  2. Posted: November 26, 2018In: Examples

    When the NFL players go on strike, a former collegiate star quarterback and a group of misfits athletes get a second chance to live out their professional football dreams.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 27, 2018 at 7:34 am

    I? haven't seen the film.? (Because I not a fan of American football.? There I said it.)? However, evaluating it as if it were a logline for a spec script, I think that Richiev's 1st version is good enough.In movies with aspirational themes, the protagonist is always struggling for nothing less thanRead more

    I? haven’t seen the film.? (Because I not a fan of American football.? There I said it.)? However, evaluating it as if it were a logline for a spec script, I think that Richiev’s 1st version is good enough.

    In movies with aspirational themes, the protagonist is always struggling for nothing less than his biggest dream.? In this case, it’s to play pro football with a shot at the Super Bowl, right?? Getting to the playoffs is a step along the way, not the final destination.? It seems to me that getting a chance to live out his biggest dream is good enough to convey what the movie is about, where the action is going to go.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: November 9, 2018In: Examples

    “When a vampire master attempts to escape the mouth of hell, a reluctant new girl teams with a small group of nerds to stop the powerful bloodsucker from unleashing hell on earth.”

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on November 11, 2018 at 11:31 am

    The series was more about the ongoing fight, week in week out, than the last big fight to prevent the big vampire from being resurrected. Perhaps: When vampires attack her small town, a reluctant new girl teams up with a group of nerds to fight the monsters and keep the town safe.

    The series was more about the ongoing fight, week in week out, than the last big fight to prevent the big vampire from being resurrected.

    Perhaps:
    When vampires attack her small town, a reluctant new girl teams up with a group of nerds to fight the monsters and keep the town safe.

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