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  1. Posted: September 24, 2018In: Examples

    When her friends get butchered near a rural Texas house, a young woman must escape the deranged family that inhabits it.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 24, 2018 at 11:12 am

    I think your logline is pretty good, You might want to add the chainsaw since it is the hook.----------------------------------------------------"When her friends are butchered near a rural Texas house, a desperate teen must escape a chainsaw wielding?maniac and his flesh-eating family."

    I think your logline is pretty good, You might want to add the chainsaw since it is the hook.
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    “When her friends are butchered near a rural Texas house, a desperate teen must escape a chainsaw wielding?maniac and his flesh-eating family.”

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  2. Posted: September 11, 2018In: Examples

    When an African-American photographer gets trapped by his white girlfriend?s family who intent to steel his body he must break free in order to stop the family?s body-snatching business.

    mrliteral Samurai
    Added an answer on September 21, 2018 at 7:55 am

    SPELLING MATTERS

    SPELLING MATTERS

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  3. Posted: September 15, 2018In: Examples

    When a nightmarish bogeyman intrudes into her friends’ dreams and kills them for real, a teenager must find a way to defeat him, before she becomes his next victim.

    kailic Logliner
    Added an answer on September 19, 2018 at 4:09 am

    It's too close to Nightmare on Elm Street. It needs a twist. Same thing but done differently. Maybe instead of "in their dreams" the boogey man gets to them in a different way? Or perhaps be more inventive with the "Nightmarish Bogeyman". Could be someone they did some injustice to that was killed aRead more

    It’s too close to Nightmare on Elm Street. It needs a twist. Same thing but done differently. Maybe instead of “in their dreams” the boogey man gets to them in a different way? Or perhaps be more inventive with the “Nightmarish Bogeyman”. Could be someone they did some injustice to that was killed and is back for revenge? ?Play with and explore this a bit more to add a new element to something that’s already been done.

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