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  1. Posted: May 7, 2016In: Examples

    After an escaped convict forces a divorced mother to hide him, they fall in love and must flee to Canada to start a new life.

    Knightrider Mentor
    Added an answer on May 9, 2016 at 7:03 am

    Yep would be tough as you'd need to portray the female as genuinely falling in love rather than suffering Stockholm syndrome.

    Yep would be tough as you’d need to portray the female as genuinely falling in love rather than suffering Stockholm syndrome.

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  2. Posted: May 7, 2016In: Examples

    When a pawn store robbery turns deadly, a Hollywood stunt driver finds himself in possession of the loot, and must destroy the violent goons who want it back. [Drive, 2011]

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on May 8, 2016 at 1:00 pm

    His being a getaway driver is important to the logline as it makes clear the fact that he is a criminal in the begining and needs to fight his way out of the crime world by the end. In other words his story of redemption, to stop working in crime, is what makes this an interesting story. After his aRead more

    His being a getaway driver is important to the logline as it makes clear the fact that he is a criminal in the begining and needs to fight his way out of the crime world by the end. In other words his story of redemption, to stop working in crime, is what makes this an interesting story.

    After his accomplice is killed on a job, a getaway driver must go on the run??with the loot and kill the assailants if he is to stop his life of crime.

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  3. Posted: May 2, 2016In: Examples

    After an unemployed single dad loses his home, he struggles to get it back by working for the corrupt real estate broker who evicted him.

    Karel Segers Logliner
    Added an answer on May 6, 2016 at 11:35 pm

    I would rephrase it a bit. "When an unemployed single dad has his home foreclosed, he must work for the real estate broker who evicted him in order to gain back his house." Something like that, "he struggles" sounds off to me. I liked the film, nothing more. It's nice to see Florida on screen.

    I would rephrase it a bit.
    “When an unemployed single dad has his home foreclosed, he must work for the real estate broker who evicted him in order to gain back his house.”
    Something like that, “he struggles” sounds off to me.
    I liked the film, nothing more. It’s nice to see Florida on screen.

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