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  1. Posted: November 25, 2020In: Action

    A civilian operative writes an AI app that guarantees facial recognition. The app also turns the phone in your pocket into a targeting sensor. Is he willing to kill to protect us all from social media?

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 25, 2020 at 9:34 pm

    I think I am missing something, There is a GPS in your phone that could assassin can use to target you. It seems like this new AI your protagonist wrote is already available.

    I think I am missing something, There is a GPS in your phone that could assassin can use to target you. It seems like this new AI your protagonist wrote is already available.

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  2. Posted: October 30, 2020In: Action

    A trio of college students discovers street racing becoming deadly when they discover a racer was a serial killer.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 3, 2020 at 4:27 am

    What if this group was "A trio of gear-head college students..." to help with focus? In your story - what is making this deadly? What are the stakes if they lose? Also, would help if you had a big bad rival. Take care.

    What if this group was “A trio of gear-head college students…” to help with focus? In your story – what is making this deadly? What are the stakes if they lose? Also, would help if you had a big bad rival.

    Take care.

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  3. Posted: October 19, 2020In: Action

    To thwart the pain of diaspora and disillusionment, a local Asian-American college student pounces into the reckless lifestyle of vigilantes, triads, extremists, and violent pop-culture fanatics.

    Michael Ro Penpusher
    Added an answer on October 20, 2020 at 1:41 am

    Maybe more specific pain of... loneliness(?) Diaspora is not a pain. And reduce antagonists to 2 or 3 (Max) To thwart the pain of lonliness (goal), an Asian-American college student (protagonist)pounces (action) into the reckless lifestyle of vigilantes, triads, and violent pop-culture fanatics (antRead more

    Maybe more specific pain of… loneliness(?) Diaspora is not a pain. And reduce antagonists to 2 or 3 (Max)

    To thwart the pain of lonliness (goal), an Asian-American college student (protagonist)pounces (action) into the reckless lifestyle of vigilantes, triads, and violent pop-culture fanatics (antagonists) .

    But what’s at stake?

    A young man (protagonist) leads (action) his oddball family (antagonists) and their real-estate-development business (goal) following a securities-fraud fiasco that put the father in jail (stake).

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