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“After his town is swarmed by the evil undead, a shy gamer, and his friends must use their gaming skills to save his brother stranded on the other side of town.” -Zombie Death Kill-
Are we talking about D&D or Call of Duty (COD) gamers? Since I didn't know, I used "savvy squad" to describe COD gamers. If they are D&D players, you can substitute them with "guild." I also assumed the brother was scouting. In a town encircled by the undead and fallout shelters, a shy teenRead more
Are we talking about D&D or Call of Duty (COD) gamers? Since I didn’t know, I used “savvy squad” to describe COD gamers. If they are D&D players, you can substitute them with “guild.” I also assumed the brother was scouting.
In a town encircled by the undead and fallout shelters, a shy teen and his [savvy squad] must use their gaming skills to rescue his brother on a scouting mission gone wrong.
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I definitely feel like I've seen this before... but with a really good twist.
I definitely feel like I’ve seen this before… but with a really good twist.
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The word 'When' usually describes an inciting incident. You have two 'when's' in your logline, indicating two inciting incidents... This is a logline issue. (Or perhaps a story issue)
The word ‘When’ usually describes an inciting incident.
See lessYou have two ‘when’s’ in your logline, indicating two inciting incidents…
This is a logline issue. (Or perhaps a story issue)